Saturday, June 25, 2005


the fire came down and burned up this town
burned it all down to the dry barren ground
and a car rides off further into the sunset
a burning sun blazing black on the carcass
and no regrets in his eyes as he drives
away from everything that was his life

© 2002 thomas bates

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

HEheeh, I hope you know all the anonymous is me, UnsaintHate.

I really like this one a whole lot. Striaght to the point, no bullshit, or fillers and the imagery is impactful. Is that a word? LoL I really like this one. One of my favorites from you.